Pie charts show main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.

Pie charts show main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
The given part charts give information about the primary reasons for
immigration
and migration in the
UK
in the year 2007.
Overall
,
it is clear that
a definite job and looking for work were the main reasons that
people
came to and left the
UK
. Having a definite job consisted of 30% of
immigration
to the
UK
, compared to emigration, at 29%. 22% of
people
who migrated from the
UK
were looking for a job.
However
, the proportion of
people
entering the
UK
for
this
purpose was 12%. The percentages of
people
who moved to join a family were almost similar with 15% for
immigration
and 13% for migration.
Although
a significant number of
people
, 26%, entered the
UK
for formal study, only 4% of migrants were those who left the
UK
for
this
goal.
While
a total of 32% of
people
gave other reasons or did not give a reason why they emigrated,
this
accounted for 17% of
people
in
immigration
.
Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words immigration, uk, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: