A close relative of yours is having a birthday lunch next week, but you know you will be working. Write a letter to your boss or supervisor to ask for some time off. In your letter, – explain the situation and why you particularly want to attend the lunch – specify the dates, times and amount of time off you will need – offer to work late or come in early another time to make up for the time

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Dear Mr. John Onasis, I am writing

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letter to request your permission to take

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hours of time off next Friday at noon. My uncle's birthday celebration is scheduled for next Friday at the Marriot Hotel in West Bay. I stayed at his house during my university study period for an easy commute.

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, we have a strong bond with each other. Despite the difference in

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he invited me for lunch with his close circle. I take off from 12pm to 3pm on September 21, 2022. The restaurant is just

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minute's drive away from our office. I am aware that

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important time to prepare for next year's planning and budget.

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I will be available to clarify any question to my colleagues. To compensate for the

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hours off, I will work

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hours after office time.

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, I will work from home to meet the deadline of my task. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Mary Ann

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

165 words

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