Poor infrastructure hinders under-developed countries from progressing and modernizing. Some people think that it should be the first problem tackled by foreign aid.

Some people believe that the

problem

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progressing and modernizing in poor-developed

states

, caused by bad infrastructure, has to be solved by foreign

countries

.

This

may indeed be true, because

such

states

, which are called “

Countries

of the 3rd world” don’t have the opportunity to develop only using their resources, whether they are human or economic

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. In

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I’m going to support the idea of the given topic and provide some examples. First of all, under-developed

countries

are mostly African

states

, which experience problems with the availability of education. Unfortunately, only the richest can afford to pay for university or even school for

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children.

Hence

, the

problem

with poor infrastructure is directly linked

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a lack of specialists.

According to

this

information,

it is clear that

foreign aid is vital in

this

area

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because without external support,

countries

of the 3rd world will never progress at a normal pace and will always be outsiders.

Secondly

,

such

states

experience much more serious issues, which require immediate solutions,

for instance

, the

problem

of poverty. More than

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half of

citizens

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of these

countries

live on the streets

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because they can’t afford any housing. So, infrastructure issues are not

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ones, so foreign support is vital in

this

area.

On the other hand

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affairs of a particular state are only a

problem

of

this

state, and foreign aid makes the receiving side a debtor.

Hence

,

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of

such

assistants can lead to a high level of dependence of a poorly developed country on a more developed one,

for example

in political terms. Taking into account

this

fact, foreign help can damage the recipient, not help. In conclusion, I would like to say that, I believe that well-developed

countries

should take care of poor ones gratuitously, because supporting others only in terms of greed can lead to dramatic consequences.