Some people thinks wild animals should not be kept.Others think there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is

an

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increasing support for the release of

animals

,

although

, there is a counterargument to that view.

Nonetheless

, it is generally accepted that setting the

animals

free is the wisest thing to do One of the reasons that might support

this

idea is the fact that keeping the

animals

might shorten those

animals

' life expectancy rate.

Additionally

, some studies prove that refrained

animals

have shorter lives compared to other

animals

who live in natural habitats.

Moreover

, living creatures in their own habitat have more sources to find and eat compared to those in

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restricted sites,

likewise

,

zoos

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. Whilst

zoos

or similar sites depend on finances to provide one.

As a result

, if the economy experiences a downturn, many kept

animals

have limited meals since the sites have

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limited

fund

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funds

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.

For instance

, during the

pandemics

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, many

zoos

opened donations

due to

food

shortage

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.

On the contrary

, putting

animals

under strict control may be beneficial in some aspects. It is generally known that

animals'

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animals

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centers

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usually have programs to do insemination in order to sustain the number of the species.

Furthermore

, by being under control, qualified

centers

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have more strict procedures focused on each animal

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needs specific improvement

such

as weight, health,

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etc.

For example

, the

animals

' diets are carefully measured before being given. In conclusion, the benefits of placing the

animals

in each natural habitat outweigh its drawbacks.

Therefore

, letting the

animals

live in their origins is recommended, even though

zoos

also

have good deeds to protect those species.