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In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development?

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In light of the growing popularity of the
Internet
, it is true that
people
 nowadays have the ability to take various actions
such
 as online shopping, remote working, and phone calls to each other at any given time. The essay attempts to shed light on both the merits and demerits of
this
 tendency before concluding that
this
 is an encouraging development. On the one hand, the proliferation of the
Internet
 could give rise to a host of serious consequences. The foremost problem is that mobile phones are one of the many primary culprits behind the loss of actual connection between
people
. In fact,
people
 often spend most of their time on virtual social networks
such
 as Facebook and Instagram
instead
 of direct meeting and chatting with others.
Moreover
, there are various e-commerce platforms with a number of attractive promotions that makes netizens are difficult to leave online application
instead
 of going to shopping centres which can distract
people
 from the daily routine they intend to accomplish, leading to a deterioration in movement productivity.
On the other hand
, there are a host of compelling reasons why I am convinced that the online trend will become an integral part of the future community.
Firstly
,
people
 can easily communicate with others without distance.
For example
, students can make foreign friends through Skype and Viber and so on to chat or video call.
Secondly
, remote working helps the public save hours and money for other things
such
 as leisure trips or daily commutes.
For example
,
due to
 the Covid-19 pandemic, everyone can work from home via support from laptops or computers which are connected to their company by the
Internet
. In conclusion,
although
 it is irrefutable that the trend in which communities use the
Internet
 in modern life could give rise to the number of adverse implications, I do believe that the upside of
this
 phenomenon is more noteworthy than its downside.
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