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The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.

The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.
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The above chart depicts the amount of money that was paid by
Brishtish
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British
 parents for
theirs
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kids'sports
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kids sports
 from 2008 to 2014
while
 the below chart illustrates how many children
participating
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 in three different sports during the same years. As can be seen from the first chart, the fee that parents from Britain spent on a monthly basis on their children's sports experienced an upward trend
throught
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through
throughout
 the years.
Besides
, football was by far the most popular sport among the three activities.,
comparing
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 to athletics and swimming. In terms of the average monthly fee, there was a significant increase in the amount of money which
recorded
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 at 20
pound
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pounds
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 in 2008 before reaching its peak at nearly 32
pound
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pounds
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 by 2014.
In addition
, soccer maintained its dominance over the surveyed period with approximately 8
million
children's
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children
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enrollment
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 each year
..
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...
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 For the second position, the number of young individuals who took part in athletics fluctuated within the range of 0.5
million
 to just under 5
million
 by the end of the
give
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 time. Turning to
swimming
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swim
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, the figure for young participants increased gradually from 2
million
 to 4
million
 over the 7 years period
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