The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.
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The above chart depicts the amount of money that was paid by
Brishtish
parents for Correct your spelling
British
theirs
Correct pronoun usage
their
kids'sports
from 2008 to 2014 Correct your spelling
kids sports
while
the below chart illustrates how many children participating
in three different sports during the same years.
As can be seen from the first chart, the fee that parents from Britain spent on a monthly basis on their children's sports experienced an upward trend Wrong verb form
participated
throught
the years. Correct your spelling
through
throughout
Besides
, football was by far the most popular sport among the three activities., comparing
to athletics and swimming.
In terms of the average monthly fee, there was a significant increase in the amount of money which Wrong verb form
compared
recorded
at 20 Add a missing verb
was recorded
pound
in 2008 before reaching its peak at nearly 32 Change to a plural noun
pounds
pound
by 2014.
Change to a plural noun
pounds
In addition
, soccer maintained its dominance over the surveyed period with approximately 8 million
children's
Change noun form
children
enrollment
each yearReplace the word
enrolled
..
For the second position, the number of young individuals who took part in athletics fluctuated within the range of 0.5 Replace the punctuation
.
...
million
to just under 5 million
by the end of the give
time. Turning to Change the verb form
given
swimming
, the figure for young participants increased gradually from 2 Change the verb form
swim
million
to 4 million
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