The picture illustrates the life cycle of a butterfly from an egg to and adult.

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The life cycle of a butterfly starts from
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ballock and goes through four steps of evaluation before it becomes a butterfly. At the beginning of
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a grown butterfly lays
egg
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an egg
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and after a
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while
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it turns
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a caterpillar.
Then
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, a caterpillar develops
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a chrysalis which is more
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wrapped
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hanging cacoon than an alive insect. The third stage of evolution is when a chrysalis becomes an adult emerges which is hatched out of a
hagning
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hanging
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cacoon with its full-fledged wings and legs and ready to fly. The fours stage is the final one which defines a butterfly as
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spiecy
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spicy
species.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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