Some people say companies should require all employees to wear uniforms at work. Others think it is unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
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workers
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wearing
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the rich
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classes
as well as
it helps to maintain the
equality among all the employees.
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uniform
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no
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although
uniform
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