Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, However, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Life
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is a long trip with different turns where we should make decisions. We chose the way we want to go. Every choice leads to
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in our
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. Experiencing alteration is inevitable. At the same
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our choices let us
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avoid us
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. Some
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are
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scared people
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, preferring a conventional way of living.
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persons are afraid of accepting challenges, leading to fear of stress and depression, affecting
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. ItThere is easier to live in the same place with the same schedule. In
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people
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feel
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safe safety
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feeling is valuable.
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status allows one to
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bellows
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to be healthy psychologically without fears about unclear situations. Other
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find stability quite boring. They
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by
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in
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. Every new modification is a new opportunity to become happier. You never know what should you accept from
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. Every suppressed situation can be a fate present, which
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the broader perspective towards growth.
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people
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are knowledgeable and successful. They are open to new
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experiences
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, curious and ready to change their mind. If about success, persons with
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alterations face
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many falls, after which they become stronger.
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experience allows them
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their goals because of patience, desire and confidence in their power. As for me, both opinions are similar.
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, when regular
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become
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routine,
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starts to be the same. Honestly, I am in favour of alternations in activity. So I
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prefer
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the balance between stability and
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. There is no easy task, but in harmony with
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yourself
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we can achieve
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • mastery
  • innovation
  • adaptability
  • personal growth
  • resilience
  • hesitancy
  • risk-taking
  • transitions
  • enrichment
  • equilibrium
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