The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
The given picture presents the
water
cycle, which is the continuous movement of water
on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Obviously that
there are three stages in the process. The first Correct word choice
apply
stage
is the evaporation of water
, the second stage
is cloud
formation and the last
stage
is the fall of water
on the surface of the Earth. First of all, the ocean contributes about 80% of total water
vapour in air
.
Add an article
the air
These the
ocean evaporation makes condensing Correct pronoun usage
The
water
vapour which become
Change the verb form
becomes
cloud
formation. As a result
, cloud
formation cross
lakes and mountains and Correct subject-verb agreement
crosses
this
cloud
produce
precipitation which Correct subject-verb agreement
produces
fall
onto lakes and mountains.
Correct subject-verb agreement
falls
The
Change preposition
In the
last
stage
, the snow on the mountains melts and goes down throw
surface runoff and the ground absorbs Correct your spelling
through
this
water
. Groundwater goes down above impervious
layer and the process of saltwater intrusion takes place before the Correct article usage
the impervious
water
enters the ocean. It happens over and over again.Submitted by dnm.best on
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Vocabulary: The word "goes down" was used 2 times.
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