The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
The diagram below shows the
narural
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natural process
proccess
that
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the
water
cycle , which is the continuous movement of
water
on, above and below the surface of the Earth. In the
diagram
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diagram,
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we can see that the
water
regular
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comes back from
ocean
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the ocean
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to
ocean
by
water
cycle and how we know it is the natural
proccess
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process
. First of all, the
ocean
contributes about 80% of total
water
and vapour in air and by
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a sunny
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day and it becomes the condensing
water
vapour. From
this
condensing
water
vapour goes to place where there are
mouniains
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mountains
where will be
repcipitation
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reprecipitation
precipitation
from the Could Formation to lakes. And it becomes the groundwater. Following that the snow on mountains melts to Surface runoff and goes to
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Impervious layer.
Subsequently
, the
water
melts to Salt
Water
Intrusion
then
to
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the ocean
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ocean
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the ocean
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and it
repeads
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repeats
everytime
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by natural
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process
proccess
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process
.
Consequently
, we see in
diagram
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the diagram
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the
water
cycle and that it continuous movement of
water
on and know that the
proccess
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process
is renewable and
then
that we have to save the
ocean
, lakes or rivers from
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pollution
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words proccess, water, ocean with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • evaporation
  • transpiration
  • condensation
  • precipitation
  • aquifers
  • percolation
  • surface runoff
  • replenishing
  • infiltrates
  • atmosphere
  • vapor
  • liquid
  • cycle
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