As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that drivers should cover the costs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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sector, the development of

road

systems is crucial

together with

an increment in the number of cars owned by people.

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road

construction is the

responsibility

of the

government

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others feel that it is the

responsibility

of the

car

owner. On the one hand, developing

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road

condition

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is essential to be executed by authorities because the implementation will be more structural and they have a large amount of

fund

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. The

government

has

a

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power to control

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many

of

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institution

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that

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related to

highway

construction since they are

supreme

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ruler

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of a country.

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, the

government

probably can delegate the

responsibility

of

road

development to

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expert

agent

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such

as the

ministry

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of public works to make up

project

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a project

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plan

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, budget

plan

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and consolidation

role

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, structurally.

In addition

, the

government

has a large amount of budget which is earned by

citizen

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citizens

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.

This

is because the

car

owner charged an exorbitant tax to the authority in order to own and drive

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a car

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on the

road

.

Therefore

, it is unfair if the

citizen

has to

paid

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for upgrading

road

works.

On the other hand

, paying money for

road

development is a consequence

from

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buying a

car

.

This

is because if people buy a

car

, they have to

aware

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about

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their

responsibility

to

paid

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several debts

particularly

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for

road

establishment.

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, the

citizen

is the main subject who absorb a lot of benefit of using

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the road

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. They

are usually use

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road

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the road

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to travel to

another place

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in

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many occasions. To exemplify, the

citizen

who use

highway

road

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everyday

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since they want to arrive

in

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their destination easier and faster but it has to be supported with a good condition of

highway

which aims to avoid a traffic accident. In conclusion, I am in favour of the opinion that developing

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should be executed by

government

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the government

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due to

they have an opportunity to accomplish it in

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of dominion and budget.