nowadays many people compain that they have difficulties having enoug sleep. what problems can lack of sleep cause? what can be done about lack pf sleep?

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important factor for humans. They have more
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sleep time
they will do work hard and
achive
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achieve
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goals
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people are spending
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of time
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mobiles
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loptops
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laptops
for
working
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purpose
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they don't have enough time to sleep.
Yes
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there are several problems if we don't have enough sleep. There are different types of problems eyes infections, spinal
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, back pain problems If we don't have much sleep people
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to make
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arrangements for the
day to day
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life what can be done
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this
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time to whenever you sleep at night you have to make
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then
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it will solve the problem.
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