The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West park Secondary School since its construction in 1950. Introduce the maps. Write what do they illustrate. Note the changes that occurred. Look attentively at the maps and note what was modified and what remained unchanged. Describe each element of the map in a separate paragraph. Tell about each element (farmland, car park, school etc) and its alteration. Use vocabulary for graph description and linking structures. Also see words from academic wordlist. Give a general overview. Write in brief about the changes.
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INTRODUCTION: The diagram shareing the information about the west
park
secondary Use synonyms
school
construction in 1950. There are some changes in the Use synonyms
school
map. PARAGRAPH 1: In the Use synonyms
year
of 1950 there is main road. In the Northwest corner there are several Use synonyms
houses
. Use synonyms
Then
slite opposite of the Linking Words
houses
there a Use synonyms
school
building. Coming to the south west corner there is a butiful farmlad. Moving forward there is a Use synonyms
playground
to play for Use synonyms
school
Use synonyms
students
in south east it's Use synonyms
besides
to the Linking Words
school
. Coming to Use synonyms
year
1980 there is some changes in Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
year
those are added Use synonyms
car
Use synonyms
park
and science block. In the Use synonyms
year
2010 all are same in as in the 1980 PARAGRAPH 2: Use synonyms
Then
compared to the 1950 and 2010 there is some difference Linking Words
that is
in the Linking Words
year
of 1950 their is Use synonyms
Houses
in that place they are changed as a Use synonyms
car
Use synonyms
park
PARAGRAPH 3: Use synonyms
Houses
: There are some Use synonyms
houses
in near the Use synonyms
school
. It is better for Use synonyms
students
who are living in the near by the Use synonyms
school
they will save some time to study Use synonyms
School
: The Use synonyms
school
is very important to study for every children. Farmland: There is one farmland Use synonyms
students
will enjoy some time in farmland to get there brains refresh. Use synonyms
Playground
: Use synonyms
Playground
is very important in the schools Use synonyms
students
have spend some time to do some physical exercise in the Use synonyms
playground
. Use synonyms
Car
Use synonyms
park
: There a Use synonyms
car
Use synonyms
park
in the Use synonyms
school
lectures who are having the motor vehicle to Use synonyms
park
. Conclusion: The Use synonyms
school
is the middle to the town it will help to go Use synonyms
students
are if they are come by bus or any other vehicle it is very easy to find the Use synonyms
school
and other surrounding areas. There is one main road near to the Use synonyms
school
. Use synonyms
Students
who are coming from so far and near by any places it is easy to come and go.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, school, year, houses, playground, students, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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