The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The images display the two maps of the changes that occurred in the village of Stokeford between 1930 and 2010.

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, it is apparent that many variations had occurred

such

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as the construction of new homes , the disappearance of farmland and the reduction of gardens in Stokeford,

whereas

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some remain things remain unchanged in the given time period.

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with, in the north-west side , in 1930, there were some shops and homes established,

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in 2010, the shops were completely replaced with the construction of new residential buildings and the post office present there experienced no change

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, the farmland on both sides of the road was completely disappeared in 2010. Moving towards the remaining information,in the former map , there were big gardens in the southeast direction, whilst they were fully destroyed in the latter map.

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, the large houses in the same direction were converted into retirement houses in 2010.

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, the primary school on the northeast side in 1930, was expanded with two more buildings in 2010.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

173 words

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The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Most have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals. During festival periods people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Is there advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?