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Some people think that children who spend a lot of time reading children’s story books are wasting their time which could be better used doing other more useful activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some people think reading story
books
 is a waste of time for
children
,
where
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whereas
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 during the growth period
children
 should be advised to be more active with other
activities
. Even though I agree that
children
 should actively explore various
activities
 as a fundamental thing, I think that reading
activities
 are very important things to do. On the one hand, parents must direct their
children
 to be active in outdoor
activities
 and healthy exercise. The growing period is very important for
children
 to try many positive things to strengthen their mental and physical. Exploratory
activities
 will provide opportunities for
children
 to recognize their talents and potential,
such
 as painting and singing will
train
 their artistic talents,
sports
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and sports
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such
 as cycling, running, playing ball and swimming will nourish and strengthen their physical strength.
On the other hand
, reading
books
 cannot be said to be a waste of time. Reading is an activity
that is
 very important for
children
 to do from an early age and do it regularly.
This
 is because reading is a successful key for every human being to understand a phenomenon and knowledge that will continue to be needed all the time. Reading story
books
 is a very good start that parents can do to
train
 their
children
's critical thinking, one day the child will be able to distinguish between true and false information.
In addition
,
children
 will become concentrated and have excellent filters in managing the information they get. We see a lot of
children
 who excel in academics
who
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and
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 have been interested in reading
books
 regularly since they were
child
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children
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.
To conclude
, I agree that at an early
age
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,age
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children
 should explore a lot of various
activities
 to
train
 their talents, mentally and improve their physique.
However
, reading story
books
 should
also
 be a top priority for
children
 to
train
 intelligence and critical thinking for their future.
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