The increasing use of technology in the workplace has made it easier for young people to find jobs and harder for older people to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While
some
people
tend towards the viewpoint that The increasing
use
of
technology
in the
workplace
has made it easier for young
people
and harder for older
people
to find
jobs
, I would have to support the idea that it can be easier for young
people
and harder for older
people
to find
jobs
due to
The increasing
use
of
technology
in the
workplace
. On the one hand, there are clear arguments that when the
use
of
technology
in the
workplace
is increasing it can make young
people
find
jobs
easier and harder for older
people
to do it. One of the main reasons can be that when older
people
were students, their schools weren’t put some emphasis on
technology
because at that time it was undeveloped like today, nowadays education put more emphasis than and it helps students have basic knowledge about using
technology
.
This
means that in past they didn’t have an opportunity to approach
technology
and at that time they weren’t given a good condition to learn about
technology
but nowadays it is different. Another reason can be that some older
people
are believing that they are too old and learning new knowledge is too late for them and it is a reasonable answer why they hard to find
jobs
today.
For example
, when my younger brother is 14 years old, he can self-find a part-time job in a restaurant easily on the
Internet
but for my 54 years old-uncle it is so hard because he doesn’t know how to
use
a computer.
On the other hand
, I agree with the viewpoint that sometimes, it hasn’t made finding
jobs
easier for young
people
.
Firstly
, approaching the
internet
isn’t easy for some
people
today.
This
is because maybe they are living in areas where educating about
technology
isn’t put emphasis on or that place is so poor and they don’t have conditions to approach to the
internet
.
For example
,
according to
,research 70% of children in Africa aren’t approached to the
internet
or computer
due to
the shortage of money for education and poor condition. In conclusion,
although
it can be easier for young
people
and harder for older
people
to find
jobs
when The
use
of
technology
in the
workplace
is increasing, I’m convinced that sometimes it isn’t really easier for all young
people
.
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