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Teenagers should have regular exams at school as this will prepare them better for life after leaving school.To what extent do you agree or disagree.

#teenagers #exams #school #life
Regular
exams
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 role in preparing
students
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 the hardships they would have to face after the completion of
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secondary school .I do agree with
this
 statement but there is still
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 that I would mention in the essay The greatest advantage of daily
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 is that
students
 can pay more attention to their studies because they will always try to
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achieve
 better scores in the class and keep them
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 the first position .
This
 behaviour can teach learners about how to work hard and stand up in all the competitive
exams
 that take place after
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 of initial years of studies. Another
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 reason
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the
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why people support regular
exams
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it
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 can help
students
 to do better in
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exam
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.
For instance
, when
students
 learn about the topic that
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they
 have been taught at that time and a teacher examines what
students
 gain from it by taking
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, it
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 their ability to learn and gain knowledge.All
this
 can assist
students
 to sharpen their
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remembering
 and gaining ability.
However
, the sole matter of disagreement is that it can
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students
 psychic behaviour . More
exams
 lead to
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 burden on
students
 Some
students
 may diligently overcome them
whereas
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 can not do multitask or not get enough time for brain rest .
This
 can
also
 turn towards the way of depression in their lives . In
conlusion
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conclusion
, I would like to argue that regular
exams
 are
indispensible
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indispensable
 in
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 life to have
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outstanding future and
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 for
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study but it should not take all the time of teenagers as mental health is
also
 imperative to keep them happy and healthy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rigorous
  • work ethic
  • disciplined approach
  • invaluable
  • higher education
  • continuous feedback loop
  • academic weaknesses
  • life skills
  • time management
  • stress management
  • over-assessment
  • stress and anxiety
  • practical skills
  • academic evaluation
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