Planting trees is very important .some people say that trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and town, while others says that housing facilities should be build instead. what is youropinion?
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earth
temperature meanwhile , some Change noun form
earth's
people
say that growing plant in free
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a free
area
is best
way to use the land in cities . Change the article
the best
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of houses over Change the article
a number
the number
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. Personally, I believe that both points Replace the word
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have
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apply
along with
my opinion.
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favour that Correct article usage
the first
people
have to increase tress in town and cities area
as it help
to maintain the pollution level over there . Needless to say , Change the verb form
helps
due to
rising
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the rising
personal
vehicles in Correct quantifier usage
number of personal
these
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this area
these areas
area
the pollution level is rapidly incline
side by side . To exemplify, it is proof that the noise and air pollution is more as Replace the word
inclining
compare
to bygone days as everyone loves to use their own vehicle rather than public transport . Change the form of the verb
compared
Consequently
, by this
global warming become a main issus
these days ,which can solve by only planting .
Correct your spelling
issues
issue
On the other hand
, the opponents think that government have to construct flats in spare
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the spare
area
to provide home facilitites
to local Correct your spelling
facilities
people
as in the current time periods
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period
people
are homeless and mostly sleep on Add an article
the road
road side
. Correct your spelling
roadside
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, they face many problem
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problems
for example
, in india
poor Change the capitalization
India
people
normally sleep on
the Change preposition
in
footpark
because they Correct your spelling
foot park
footmark
not
have any shelter to cover their Change the verb form
do not
did not
head
in cities Fix the agreement mistake
heads
area
.Hence
to cover the need to
these Change preposition
of
people
government have to build houses in free
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, Change the form of the verb
conclude
although
trees are important to balance the ecosystem in
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at
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to
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I
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apply
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