Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic,social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

There are plenty of problems relative to
children
.
For example
,teens are coming across more physical forces from educational,communal and trade positions.
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essay intends to discuss the causes of these pressures and
suggest
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some measures to alleviate the problem. I hope that
children
must be
defensed
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defended
from
such
increase
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pressures. There are many instructional stress on
youngs
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young
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.Today,every
parents
want their
the
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cards
are
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stacked in
childrenʼs
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favour in every field.And they think sending their
children
to the best schools,where the schools
are control
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all-embracing.
Then
,
children
do not release depth depression
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occasions.And teens do not
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talents.
Besides
, teenagers have community and private enterprise positions. Nowadays problems
which
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are
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among
children
relative to
this
.
For instance
,
teen
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teens
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purchase a new phone and other
children
want
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this
telephone but when they are unable to do so,they get stressed. To tackle
this
problem
parents
should have practical supposition from their
children
.
In addition
,teachers should
also
be responsible for the behaviour of students at school.
For example
,each student should be treated
according to
his character. If the
studentʼs
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student's
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a
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classmates or teachers have a bad effect on the student,the child may become depressed. In conclusion,
children
face many challenges at the same time.
Children
should be trained for any situation by
parents
.My view is that
main
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responsibility for solving the issue lies with
parents
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  • academic pressure
  • globalized world
  • competitive education system
  • social media influences
  • cyberbullying
  • commercial pressures
  • aggressive marketing
  • materialistic desires
  • peer pressure
  • high expectations
  • standardized testing
  • quantifiable performance
  • stress and anxiety
  • extracurricular achievements
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