The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly .this is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council.in your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what could be done about the problem

Dear Sir, My name is Chidinma Elisha,I live at 167 Claret Street Worldbank Owerri, I write to you to inform you about the problem we are having with the garbage bin in our area.
Firstly
, the trash bin is designed to collect quite a large number of rubbish through a hole at the top and after collection, it seals itself properly. The problem we are facing currently is that the lid is damaged thereby making it not to seal after dirt is poured into it and it
also
makes the rubbish spill all over the floor.
Secondly
,
this
has posed so many challenges for me and my neighbours, most of us have been in and out of the hospital because of the bad influence of
this
in the air we breathe,
Also
, we spend time that should be allocated to our personal lives trying to clean up that area on a daily basis.
Furthermore
, I suggest that the garbage collection bin be removed and a new one put in its place, Alternatively, if it is something that can be repaired, it should be sent to the proper technicians so that they can change the cover. I look forward to getting a positive feedback from you. I
also
want to thank you for your continuous effort in making the local area a conducive place to live. Yours faithfully Chidinma Elisha
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rubbish collection schedule
  • overflow
  • accumulation
  • attracts pests
  • health hazards
  • unsightly appearance
  • foul odors
  • quality of life
  • reliable
  • frequent
  • community awareness programs
  • waste reduction
  • recycling
  • community composting solutions
  • organic waste
  • installation
  • public bins
  • strategic locations
  • littering
  • residential bins
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