The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly .this is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council.in your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what could be done about the problem

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Dear Sir, My name is Chidinma Elisha,I live at 167 Claret Street Worldbank Owerri, I write to you to inform you about the problem we are having with the garbage bin in our area.

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, the trash bin is designed to collect quite a large number of rubbish through a hole at the top and after collection, it seals itself properly. The problem we are facing currently is that the lid is damaged thereby making it not to seal after dirt is poured into it and it

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makes the rubbish spill all over the floor.

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this

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has posed so many challenges for me and my neighbours, most of us have been in and out of the hospital because of the bad influence of

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in the air we breathe,

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, we spend time that should be allocated to our personal lives trying to clean up that area on a daily basis.

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, I suggest that the garbage collection bin be removed and a new one put in its place, Alternatively, if it is something that can be repaired, it should be sent to the proper technicians so that they can change the cover. I look forward to getting a positive feedback from you. I

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want to thank you for your continuous effort in making the local area a conducive place to live. Yours faithfully Chidinma Elisha

chidinmaelisha24Mon May 15 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

229 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rubbish collection schedule
overflow
accumulation
attracts pests
health hazards
unsightly appearance
foul odors
quality of life
reliable
frequent
community awareness programs
waste reduction
recycling
community composting solutions
organic waste
installation
public bins
strategic locations
littering
residential bins

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