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TOPIC: A serious problem affecting countries around the globe is the lack of water for drinking, washing and other household uses. Why do many countries face water shortages and what can be done to alleviate the problem?

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Water
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 is one of the most essential factors for the human being but there are so many people who are facing the serious problem of reaching
water
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 all over the world.
According to
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 certain research, only 2% of the
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 can be used as drinkable resources on the earth. I am of the opinion that the reason for the
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 shortages is caused by several elements.
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, I believe that the main reasons are a lack of precipitation and management skills.
Firstly
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, many countries that have little precipitation are suffering from
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 shortages and they have tended to rely on other
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 resources
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 as melting snow or underground
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.
For instance
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, Uzbekistan has just 20mm of rainfall per year and they constantly struggle with the
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 problem. I know that it does not depend on their choice but they need to concentrate to develop reservoirs to keep
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 in a certain place.
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, most nationals have problems with handling the
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 and it causes serious effects on our life
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 the
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 shortage could be restored by
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 management.
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, the Aral Sea has been dried because of the failure of agricultural control
such
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 as cotton farms because that work absorbs tons of
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.
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, the government are still supporting the farming of cotton
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 of managing the usage of the
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. In conclusion, several globes are faced with a tremendous issue of
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. I believe that we need to solve it quickly to help people live a proper life. For it, the government must put their efforts to find out the best way to keep the
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 if they do not have suitable alternative methods.

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