It is
undeniableCorrect article usage
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fact that more and more young people come across a number of
pressures
which are mainly from
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, social and
also
trading approaches
today'sChange preposition
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time
.
This
essay intends to discuss the reasons
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this
phenomenon and
also
suggest some ways to
the problem.
sure people protect
children
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which is mounting
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Children
have
such
academic problems.
Today
's
child
is not competing with other
children
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are living next door,
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even
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one's town or nation. They are competing with the
child
where are
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village. In the past the huge planet Earth is
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small
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onChange preposition
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today
's global village. Their
children
wanted to excel by
parents
in each area.
Parents
send their
children
to the best , where their
children
's school bags are heavier than their
child
itself.
Children
have private lessons after school. They don'
t
have extra
time
to bring out their hidden abilities.
More
children
have many social and commercial
pressures
. Socially the
children
of
today
's
time
are living in a big dilemma.
Children
want to live in global culture but their
parents
require
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way. Sometimes
this
makes them disobedient in
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direction to rules laid by their grandparents or their
parents
. After that
children
also
encounter peer pressure, they
also
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good if their peers are good but when their peers are bad, both of them will be very
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This
peer
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them with the consumerist society of
today
next it can
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lead to much stress and
also
it can
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them quick to nervous. The
lastestCorrect your spelling
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model of technology
for example
phones, laptops and other things when
children
see them with their friends they want to get them. They are unable to do so and their
parents
resist something,
then
children
get stressed.
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is not easy.
Parents
should be caring and kind to their
children
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also
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realistic expectations
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their
parents
.
Then
ThayCorrect your spelling
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should be
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time
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their
children
.The biggest responsibility is on the schools and teachers. Teachers should try to bring out the best in each
child
and should competition and co-operation be taught at the same
time
. If
children
don'
t
win, they will annoy but they shouldn'
t
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is other.
Children
have to be taught to win with modesty and
also
lose with elegance.
Summing up, we haven'
t
got any doubt that
children
of
today
are encountering so
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and more
pressuresFix the agreement mistake
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however
steps should be taken on
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footing to keep safe their innocent childhood.
these
pressures
will stifle
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of
childFix the agreement mistake
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which are physical and psychological.