Some people believe that teenagers should be doing unpaid community service. This could benefit the teenagers and community. To what extent to you agree or disagree with this statement.

A large number of adolescents feel that the world does not understand them enough, partly

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the changes occurring in their

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both physically and psychologically and

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in the increasing tendency for them to act out during

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particular period. I completely disagree with the statement that teenagers should be required to do unpaid services in the

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. First of all, I believe that the lack of remuneration for adolescents working for the

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will not be of benefit to them because

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will not help to boost their work morale.

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is because there is nothing to improve their performance in the service that they are providing to the

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and I believe that

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can hinder their work performance in the future.

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an adolescent working in a

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library during working hours and goes home tired and stressed but no stipend to encourage him or her will not be advantageous at all and

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might even allow that teenager to have ill feelings towards the

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, I disagree that adolescents doing free

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work will be of benefit to them and the

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because an adolescent not being paid for his or her services in a particular place will feel left out and lonely.

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is not good for the

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as teenagers are going through

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of emotional transitions and

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might lead to various mental problems,

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eating disorders, body image disorders, depression and even suicide.

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, I’ll state that teenagers are similar to every other

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in the working population and should be treated the same way in every aspect and

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should be remunerated for whichever service they render in their

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