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In many parts of the world, women study science and technology but do not work in these fields. What are the problems women face? What solutions can be taken to encourage women to work in science and technology?

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This
 essay will look at
women
 and how they can play important roles in the development of the country.
Although
 they study computer science and subjects, they do not choose
this
 field as a career. Troubleshooting is offered to resolve
this
 issue. These are some problems that
the
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female
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 face in working life. Long working hours are among the main reasons why
women
 do not prefer to work in fields related to science and information technology.
First,
there is a 9-hour shift that usually starts in the middle of the day and ends in the evening, compared to teaching jobs that usually start in the early morning and finish around midday.
Secondly
,
such
 jobs require attendance on weekends. In order to improve
this
 situation.
Finally
, very few offices have
day
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care
 facilities for the children of female employees, so
women
 with young children are forced to leave their
child
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children
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 at home.
Therefore
,
women
 and highly qualified people must stay at home to take
care
 of their young children.
However
, there are some solutions to every problem,
women
 especially mothers should always be supported.
First,
the state establishes a child protection law, whereby his mother takes
care
 of him for at least one year with a full salary, and for the second year with half a salary, and
this
 guarantees her work.
Secondly
, overtime in companies at times other than official working hours, can be done from home, using social networks, And the Internet.
Finally
, establishing a nursery in every company to take
care
 of the child of female employees. In conclusion, it is easy to see can be emphasized that few measures can improve and encourage
women
 to be a part of science and technology jobs, which will surely help improve the economic growth of the country.
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