The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one are of Britian. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distribiuted.
The given table and pie charts demonstrate data on the police
budget
, and how the budget
was spent on different areas such
as salaries, technology or buildings and transportation in 2017 and 2018. Overall
, the most important income of the budget
provided
by Add a missing verb
was provided
National
Government, and the lowest proportion was coming from other sources like grants for each Correct article usage
the National
years
. Change to a singular noun
year
Therefore
, the budget
was spent on mostly salaries, and only small percentages were placed for
technological investments in 2017 and 2018.
It is true that Change preposition
on
police
Correct article usage
the police
budget
was mostly supplied by National Government in 2017 as 175.5 million
, which was slightly increased by 2.3 million
. The second important source for the budget
was local taxes which were improved nearly
10% during a year Change preposition
by nearly
of
periodChange preposition
apply
,
and reached 102.3 Remove the comma
apply
million
in 2018. Although
other sources only took small contribution
, these Fix the agreement mistake
contributions
were
increasedUnnecessary verb
apply
a
half Change preposition
by a
million
after
a year later. Eventually, the total Change preposition
apply
budget
improved more than 10 million
,
and raised approximately 318 Remove the comma
apply
million
in 2018.
In 2017 a quarter of the budget
was spent on salaries which was the highest investment area, however
it reduced by 6% over a year. The expenses of basic infrastructures Add a comma
,however
such
as buildings and transportation were protected its place each years
, but the investment Change to a singular noun
year
of
technology was improved to 14% in 2018.Change preposition
in
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Vocabulary: The word "improved" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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