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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#media #interaction #people #society
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 interactions among
people
 are being replaced by virtual ones through social media .
people
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 regarding
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 new issue,
i
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 will
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 discuss
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by
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 perspective in subsequent paragraphs. The individuals who are likely attracted towards
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face to face
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face-to-face
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 interaction
argues
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 that it is convenient and
hasslefree
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 for someone to interact .
further
more
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it allows one to communicate
to
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 another from any corner of the globe and
at
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 the comfort of their home.
This
 should be considered a great merit of social media, allowing interaction without
physical
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a physical
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 presence 
on the contrary
 side, the other part of the argument says that many
people
 think that it is leading toward weakening of social bonds among
people
 and youngsters are now isolating themselves from the surrounding and Cutting
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 their interactions which are the basis of our human societies which is socialising with its community members, which many feel could have a devastating impact on our collective social groups and communities.  So I conclude it to the fact that even though the level of convenience it provides should be appreciated but at the cost of deteriorating the aspect of
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 race makes it an unfair deal.
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