Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Currently, there are strong discussions regarding the role of agriculture and trade in
the
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society
. Some
persons
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argue that it is fundamental to produce all the
food
to nourish the
population
regardless of the
production
from abroad,
while
others defend the idea of
the
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international trade as a keystone of modern
society
and the fight against
hungry
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. I disagree with the idea that any country needs to be self-sufficient in terms of
food
production
,
however
, it is important to recognise the role of
food
sovereignty. The role of local agriculture and
production
is crucial in the economy and culture of any country. In
fact
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without proper crops and
avaible
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available
resources, no
society
can survive and grow.
In addition
, territories with a strong
food
sector are less vulnerable to external shocks
such
as supply chain delays and an increase in the international price of petrol that can lead to
food
price inflation and hunger
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the low-income
population
.
This
is the idea of
food
soveignty
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sovereignty
, where every country produces for itself, taking care of the proper gastronomy and necessities without depending on a foreign presence. On the other side, history has taught us that
the
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international commerce and
the
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comparative advantage
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beneficial to increase
the
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food
production
,
the
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wealth of the countries involved in
the
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trade and to reduce hunger. Countries that are not blessed with fertile lands or do not have enough space can feed all of the
population
through specialization in capital-intensive or
labor-intensive
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labour-intensive
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activities, and the exchange of the goods produced
to
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food
.
This
is the case of Japan
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Switzerland, neither of them
have
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a strong agricultural sector,
however
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both are rich and can feed all of their citizens. In my
opinion
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it is not
neccesary
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necessary
to produce all of the
food
to feed the
population
,
instead
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there are market-based solutions that can help allocate better the resources.
However
,
food
sovereignty and local
production
are alternatives to protect the
society
in case of disruptions in
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imports or other external factors.
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