Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Living in a state where you should
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alien accent can reason serious social
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. Personally, I agree with
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, I argue
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which speak a foreign
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. The first reason to mention is that in modern life have three
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. It is English, Russian,
Chinese
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influenced these
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countries speak their
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speak their
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Russian
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speak CIS
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know Russian
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CIS countries some individuals do not know your native
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. The second cause to be pointed out is that people who know foreign
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issue for your authority. Losing it is
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character. After will be poor consequences for everyone. If
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native
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traditional, historical and
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rules in your nation.
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do not understand which consequences
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them. Of course, these examples may not represent all cases. On balance,
however
, I tend to believe if people always speak a foreign accent
then
losing their native nation. Wherein some
states
no action is taken to mitigate
this
situation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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