Your best friend is moving back to your city after being overseas for five years. Write a letter to convince your friend to move in with you. In the letter: - Explain how much you have missed your friend - Describe how you feel about your friend’s return - Give reasons that you and your friend should share a home Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Jenish, How are you? I'm really excited to hear that you are returning back to my city after five years. I'm writing to encourage you to settle in with me.
Firstly
, in these five years, I missed you a lot. I was always remembering you
while
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I went to drink coffee in our favourite place and missed those funny comments we passed on to other customers.
Moreover
, I saw our funny and memorable conversation snaps at the weekend. I always tried to call you but I can't because I thought you were
being
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busy.
Secondly
, I am feeling over the moon right now as
,
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we meet after a long time. I took three
days
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leaves
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from my work, and want to spend valuable time with you. Plus, I have a surprise for you and I think you really liked
this
one.
Lastly
, I request you to stay with me for a couple of next years because I want to live a life with you as we lived early without tensions and happily. We will share a room and a kitchen, and enjoy our hostel life again. Let me know what you think about it. See you soon. Best regards, Milan
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