The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.

The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.
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The line graph provides information about the changing of inhabitants in three different
of
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provinces of Oregon, the USA over the
period
in question.
Overall
,
Washington
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population shows an upward trend among other states of Oregon over the
period
of 60 years.
While
,
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Columbia
and Yamhill had progressively
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between the years 1940 to 2000. The residents of
Columbia
rose significantly from 75, 000 in 1940 to just over 120,000 in 1970. Yet,
Columbia
locals witnessed a sharp rise, from approximately 130,000 to more than 240,000 from 1970 to 2000.
In addition
, there was a gradual increase in Yamhill population, from 30 to 45
thousands
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during a
period
from 1940 to 1970. Between 1970 and 2000 saw
a
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substantial growth in the number of people in Yamhill.
Moreover
, the number of individuals in
Columbia
climbed steadily from about 25,000 to over 35,000 within these years.
Throughout a
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period
from 1970 to 2000 saw a sharp growth in the number of locals in
Columbia
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, columbia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population change
  • significant increase/decrease
  • growth rates
  • economic opportunities
  • migration patterns
  • environmental conditions
  • rapid growth/decline
  • industrial development
  • natural disasters
  • governmental policies
  • historical data
  • economic conditions
  • environmental sustainability
  • technological advancements
  • social implications
  • economic implications
  • environmental implications
  • infrastructure demands
  • natural resources
  • community life
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