Some people think that government should not spend money on sports stadium and building theatres. Instead it should spend more money on education. Do you gree or disgree?

Education should be prioritized to acquire more money from the

government

before

sports

stadiums and building

theatres

, thought some

people

. I truly believe that it is of equal importance because

sports

and

art

places encourage

people

to have positive health that leads to better study,

as well as

providing a space for

people

who have a talent in an

art

term, which is one part of learning. The most crucial reason why

sports

stadium

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and

theatres

are the places that a

government

should give a value as equal

as

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education

because

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these

area

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provide accessibility for

human

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to get better health both mentality and physicality. When

people

have many public spaces for

doing

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exercise, enjoying a movie, or spending time with their family, a relaxed feeling

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release

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, resulting in

they

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become

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healthier and urging their

brain

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absorbing

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knowledge greater.

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, a working man has to study after work,

with

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stress and pressure that he has faced all day

affect

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him can not focus or remember what he studied.

As a result

, he can not improve his ability if he does not overcome his fatigue. The

sports

field and the

theatres

are the alternative choices for healing

people

,

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and are

a

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one of

factors

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to improve their learning. Another reason for a

government

should balance the spending between education and

art

,

sports

places and

theatres

, is

giving

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an

oppotunity

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opportunity

for some groups which have a talent

skill

of

art

more than

academic

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discipline. Even though most of

population

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likely

persure

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pursue

pressure

a certificate of science because

a

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social value, there are

another type

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of

people

that has passionate about

sports

or drama acting. Equivalent options for every kind of population should be supported by the

government

, because, when they develop

themselve

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themselves

in their own passion, it means a country is

driving

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forward by the capability of these

people

also

.

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, a representative of the country, no matter which term of

skill

,

also

raise

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the

country

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reputation.

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the cinema and

sport

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area are the place for some

people

can

practice

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their skills,

as well as

probably being their working place in the future. In conclusion, the

government

should provide

equally

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money for both academic

site

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and are

site

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because

sports

stadium

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stadiums

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and

theatres

are the place, which

helping

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help

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people

have

a

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apply

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good health that

leading

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leads

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to

study

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studying

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smarter,

as well as

giving

a

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apply

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value

for

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to

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some

people

who have a talent

skill

of

art

as equal as

people

who have an academic

skill

.