Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by

some

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Some

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that not all

data

is suitable for free sharing because they believed that

data

is too valuable,

while

others think that it is good to

share

as much

information

as possible. I myself believe that each party have their own perspective

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on their respective circumstances. If those

people

were struggling to collect the

data

then

they will give the

data

a higher value,

conversely

/

by contrast

if they got the

data

easily

then

they will easily

share

the

data

back

to

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with

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others. The

data

itself

divided

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is divided

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into two

type

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types

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namely primary

data

(

data

that

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apply

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collected directly from the main sources which

usually

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are usually

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raw

data

) and secondary

data

(

data

that

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collected from processing the primary

data

). Much greater effort is required for collecting the primary

data

since the collectors/surveyors have to go straight into the field. After that, the

information

is needed to analyze to make the

data

clearer and

useful

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more useful

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. For

people

working in the field to collect the

data

, the

information

that they collected is more valuable since

of

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the process to go through was challenging. The views will be different if we got the secondary

data

easily from the

data

source,

such

as the internet. As we

known

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already in nowadays era it is relatively easy to get lots of

data

particularly

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,particularly

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through

the

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online media.

People

that got the

information

easily tend to be easier to

share

the

data

back. They argue that the more

people

share

data

, will be more the usefulness for the community or society. I certainly can’t judge them wrong since each of them had their argument through their experiences which is totally different

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depending

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on how they got the

information

/the

data

.