Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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that not all

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is suitable for free sharing because they believed that

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is too valuable,

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others think that it is good to

share

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as much

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as possible. I myself believe that each party have their own perspective

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on their respective circumstances. If those

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were struggling to collect the

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then

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they will give the

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a higher value,

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by contrast

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if they got the

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easily

then

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they will easily

share

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the

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back

to

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others. The

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itself

divided

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into two

type

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namely primary

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(

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that

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collected directly from the main sources which

usually

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raw

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) and secondary

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that

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collected from processing the primary

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). Much greater effort is required for collecting the primary

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since the collectors/surveyors have to go straight into the field. After that, the

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is needed to analyze to make the

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clearer and

useful

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more useful

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. For

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working in the field to collect the

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, the

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that they collected is more valuable since

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the process to go through was challenging. The views will be different if we got the secondary

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easily from the

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source,

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as the internet. As we

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already in nowadays era it is relatively easy to get lots of

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particularly

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through

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online media.

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that got the

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easily tend to be easier to

share

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the

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back. They argue that the more

people

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share

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data

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, will be more the usefulness for the community or society. I certainly can’t judge them wrong since each of them had their argument through their experiences which is totally different

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on how they got the

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/the

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.