The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given first graph illustrates the
percentage
of computer
ownership in two different years; meanwhile, the second graph portrays the level of computer
ownership by education
in 2002 and 2010.
Overall
, people
who owned computers rose from 2002 until 2010 and since the level of education
is higher computer
ownership increased in both years.
To begin
with, in 2002 people
who owned a computer
was 58%, which rose to 60% in 2014. The percentage
increased until 2010. In 2006 the proportion was 63%, and slightly rose to 60%. In 2010, which is the highest, was 73%.
Furthermore
, in 2002, the number of people
without a high school diploma was 15% of owned computers. The percentage
increased since the level of education
is higher. The number of people
with postgraduate qualifications was 80%. The same situation happened in 2010. The people
who did not finish high school got 40% and for people
who got their education
master, the percentage
was 98%.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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