You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You have recently ordered an item from the internet, but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter •Describe what you purchased •Explain why you are not happy with the purchase •Tell them what you would like them to do about the situation You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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to tell you that I am not happy with

purchase

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the purchase

a purchase

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I made from your website yesterday morning, order number #1243 I ordered a full set like the catalogue, including a white halter neck top and plated mini

skirt

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with a small hairband as

gift

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a gift

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Wrong verb form

following

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your promotion.

However

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, today when I receive the order, there are just a set of clothes without the gift.

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, I found the

skirt

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with

zip

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the zip

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behind is broken, I can not wear it. My purchase has total three items but I just got one. I have read the exchange and return policy of your brands.

Although

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I am so disappointed, I just want to exchange the

skirt

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and get

extra

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an extra

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gift, I would like to request the new

skirt

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as soon as possible. Should you have any questions, feel free to contact me via email

[email protected]

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at [email protected]

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I trust

this

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matter will be resolved soon. Best regards, Mai Huong

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

163 words

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