You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You have recently ordered an item from the internet, but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter •Describe what you purchased •Explain why you are not happy with the purchase •Tell them what you would like them to do about the situation You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
to tell you that I am not happy with
purchase
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the purchase
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I made from your website yesterday morning, order number #1243 I ordered a full set like the catalogue, including a white halter neck top and plated mini
skirt
with a small hairband as
gift
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a gift
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follow
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following
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your promotion.
However
, today when I receive the order, there are just a set of clothes without the gift.
In addition
, I found the
skirt
with
zip
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the zip
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behind is broken, I can not wear it. My purchase has total three items but I just got one. I have read the exchange and return policy of your brands.
Although
I am so disappointed, I just want to exchange the
skirt
and get
extra
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an extra
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gift, I would like to request the new
skirt
as soon as possible. Should you have any questions, feel free to contact me via email
[email protected]
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I trust
this
matter will be resolved soon. Best regards, Mai Huong
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