Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.

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. Some people argue that there should be fixed punishments for each type of
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, some others have an opinion that the circumstance and the motivation behind the
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into the category that support the second view,
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must be considered before fixing the
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rates all over the world
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showing a decreasing trend and
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the severity of the punishments.
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towards women many
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countries have increased the intensity of the
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penalty and life imprisonment has helped to reduce the
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of initiatives will be very much beneficial to make
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society a safer place.
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a chance that criminals may find
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in the law and may trap an innocent person who may not have any connection with that event.
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a genuine investigation must be conducted by the
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officials before giving the final verdict of
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rate all over the world
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their fair trial which not only
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the circumstances of the
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but
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the motivation for committing the
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, when a person commits a
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as a part of
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must be valued before giving the final
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, everyone must be served equally by
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justice should not be negatively
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am concerned,
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and the situation for the
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must
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be considered before fixing the
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, since the
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is mainly given to prevent
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future
crimes
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fixed punishments
  • consistency
  • predictability
  • deter crime
  • potential offenders
  • streamline
  • judicial process
  • bias
  • corruption
  • complexity
  • human behavior
  • circumstances
  • justice system
  • intent
  • remorse
  • socio-economic background
  • rehabilitate offenders
  • recidivism rates
  • flexible punishment systems
  • inconsistencies
  • perceived injustices
  • public trust
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