Once children start school, teachers become a more important influence on children's intellectual and social development than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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and social well-being,
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others opine that
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involvement is vital .
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behaviour left
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positive impression on
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department of NYU (Newyork University) in 2015 among various
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from different states
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88 % of students prefer educators as a role
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.
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it is proved my view that mentors play an important role in personal development .
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with ,there are numerous reasons that few individuals opine that
parents
are critical for
children
mental and social
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.
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parents
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with
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since birth so they know their needs without even telling them.Every now and
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give a hand to
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activities
such
as buying groceries where they learn to use simple
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mathematics
which requires in
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life .It is often seen if
parents
maintain excellent relationships with neighbours and
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which
also
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of
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newspaper revealed that
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footfall
instead
of educators.
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,Even though few masses believe that
parents
are crucial still I strongly
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that teachers are the
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who
guide
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children
in various aspects of life and assist to improve social intellectual and social development .
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