Your neighbour has recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter Explain the reason for the noise Apologise Describe what action you will take Write at least 150 words You do not need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows Dear ………………………,
Dear Caren,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. Hope you are doing good
. I got your letter yesterday. First of all, I sincerely apologise for the inconvenience caused.
As soon as Change the word
well
i
received your letter , Change the capitalization
I
i
called the tenants residing in the house. Change the capitalization
I
Mary
, the current tenant in the flat was not keeping well , due to
which her elder sister and their family had to stay with them for the past few days. Since Mary
was hospitaised
, her sister Judy had to come over and take care of her Correct your spelling
hospitalised
hospitalized
two year old
niece. It was not only Judy but Add a hyphen
two-year-old
also
her 2 kids of
Change preposition
apply
age
10 and 7 Fix the agreement mistake
ages
were
Correct pronoun usage
who were
also
there, that
created the noise. Some Correct pronoun usage
apply
cabnet
works were Correct your spelling
cabinet
also
going on there in the kitchen and dressing room. Anyway
the Add the punctuation
,Anyway
carepentary
works were completed by yesterday and Correct your spelling
carpentry
Mary
is getting well too.
So Judy and family
will be moving out Correct pronoun usage
their family
her family
his family
with in
2 days and Correct your spelling
within
Mary
confirmed that she will take care of the issues and will keep the noise down.
Once again, i
extend my heartfelt apologies. I will visit you soon, probably by the end of spring vacation. Thank you for Change the capitalization
I
yor
understanding.Correct your spelling
your
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite