Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives, others think that adult life brings more happiness, inspite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

It is true that some criminals who have been punished chose to break the law for the second time. There are many reasons behind

this

trend, and governments and societies should make much more

efforts

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to eliminate/ help them. There are many reasons behind

this

trend, and governments and societies should make much more

efforts

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to eliminate/ help them.

To begin

with, the states have already collected

fees

through

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in

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many ways. All

spendings

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spending

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by residents would involve a part of

acedemic

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academic

taxes. So the students who are studying in private

schools

have paid educational taxations on their

tuition

.

For example

, if someone paid his

school

tuition

, a small part of his

tuition

would be possessed by the management which is work for education.

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,

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private

school

students do not get any knowledge or advantages from the public academic system. The students would be unwilling to pay money to state

authourities

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authorities

. The families would suffer from more economic stress if states ask taxes from them. The

tuition

fees

of private

schools

are more expensive than the

fees

in

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the

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public

schools

. Additional

fees

may cause some financial

crisis

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crises

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to

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for

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specific families.

Furthermore

, their life

declines

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, which might lead to disappointment with

governmnets

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governments

government

.

For example

, a poor family afford their kids to

the

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primary

school

,

they

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have not only

pay

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the expensive fee from

schools

, but

also

the taxes from

state

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education system. They have to give up to let their kid go to

school

.

To conclude

,

while

it is necessary for the academic systems to receive some taxations, it is not reasonable to ask

fees

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for fees

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from

the

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families which have children in primary educational systems.