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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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One of the issues being raised is that some
people
 consider that
parents
 should teach how to be good members of
society
. Others have the opposite opinion. They believe that
school
 should provide the
knowledge
 of a good person in
society
.
However
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 there is no absolute agreement on whether
parents
 should provide
knowledge
 or is it a
school
 commitment A commonly held belief is that
parents
 should provide
this
 type of
knowledge
. As
evidence
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 they point to the fact that
parents
 are the first teachers of a child and they are obligated to give the basis of
society
 principles and etiquette in public.
Furthermore
 children without any teaching of how
society
 constructs,
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could lead to that children may grow closed.
On the other hand
, some
people
 claim that only
school
 should provide
knowledge
 of how to behave in
society
.
For
example
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 they mention that pupils have always been in contact with surrounding
people
 and will get experience by contacting classmates and friends.
In addition
, most
people
 get the experience of life in
school
.
Therefore
 they will study
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 or 12 years in a row In conclusion, taking everything mentioned up, I would argue that
parents
 provide
basic
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 structure of
behave
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 in
society
 and
school
 gives some more experience to make
people
 good with others
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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