the graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person. in the UK, Sweden, Italy, Portugal between 1967 and 2007. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates, 4 countries
such
as UK
, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal citizens emitting the minimum amount of carbon dioxide during the period between 1967 and 2007.
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, In the beginning, Portugal People were releasing low amounts of Co2, and the Uk at the first position in Diagram.
To embark with, From 1967 to 2007 Change preposition
in portugal
portugal
, the emission of co2 level is gradually increased. It was below 2% in the early years and reach near to 6% in the Change the capitalization
Portugal
year
2007. However
, Compared to other nations Portugal is the least. Next is Italy, in the year
1967 it showed 5% and it rose up
to 8% in the Change preposition
apply
year
2007.
Although
, In the beginning year
Sweden released 9 % in 1967 and reach 11% in 1977. After that, it went down in 1987 showing 7%. In 2007 it reach below 6%. Last
but not least. Uk demonstrated 11% in 1967 and remain stable till 1977. In following years there was a slight drop and in 2007 it declared 10%Submitted by anjualex444 on
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