Some people think that schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet while others believe that nothing can replace physical classrooms with direct guidance from teachers.Discuss both views( and give your own opinion).

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people claim

children

should not attend

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schools

anymore because of getting necessary information on the

internet

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others think that

schools

are more important than the

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due to

being physical

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. In my opinion, going to school for

pupils

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effect than online education. In

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side of the education of attending

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schools

compared with online institutions and provide relevant examples from my experience. Nowadays, numerous

children

are going to

schools

in order to study different subjects from their

teachers

. Indeed, going to

schools

so as to educate

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the most important and useful for

children

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school, they learn effectively from their

teachers

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pupils

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the subject they will ask

teachers

to help them

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to do the exercises.

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,

teachers

instruct face to face to

pupils

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people believe that they do not need to

schools

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anymore

due to

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the

internet

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.

Children

can get

necessary

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information for their subjects on the

internet

.

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children

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websites

instead

of

teachers

.

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the one hand, you can find all of

available

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information that you need.

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other hand if

pupils

are at the lesson at school they are able to discuss

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that they give. The discussion lesson is interesting and beneficial for them. Nothing can replace

physically

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classrooms though. In conclusion, some

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individuals say that presently

schools

are not more important than

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websites.

Children

ought to learn

with

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their subjects on the

internet

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. Others believe that classrooms are useful for

children

. I

am completely claim

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that

schools

are necessary for

children

.