You have moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all communication there. Write a letter to your bank branch. In the letter, mention: •Where have you moved? • What problem are you facing regarding the bank’s communication? • What you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address.

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Dear Sir, My name is Stuti Sheth and I am writing

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letter requesting to update my

address

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on file. Recently, I moved to Toronto for some personal reason. And

however

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I was not able to update the

address

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on file. My new

address

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: 43 Westbrook, Toronto, ON, M1E 5C4. Unfortyunely, all the paper work are being sent to the old

address

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and I am not able to review them,

this

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includes my bank statements and paper work for my investment account. I need

this

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documents as its states my monthly bill for the credit plus the fees for the investment account. It's my humble request to re-send all the documents on my new mailing

address

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as soon as possible. Please feel free to contact me via email : [email protected], if you need any other

further

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information. Thank you so much for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Stuti Sheth

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

151 words

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