You have just read an article in an international magazine which contains information about your town that is incorrect Write a letter to the editor of the magazine, in your letter Correct the information in the article Explain why it is important for the magazine to give Correct information Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir
It is a great pleasure to write to you, your work in providing information for travellers through your magazine over the years is highly commendable and a lot of us owe you gratitude.
However
, I wish to draw your attention to the article on page two of volume three 2023 edition, about Owerri town, where you wrote that only one restaurant serves international cuisine. Linking Words
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article is misleading, as lots of restaurants, especially those located around the new city layout serve a variety of international dishes. Kings Dine, hungry Man, and Mimis Lounge, to mention a few places where foreign cuisines are served
The need to ensure the accuracy of your
Publications can not be over-emphasized, you are a trusted brand and travellers always use information from your papers as a guide.
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situation, I will suggest you publish the correct version of the article in your next publication and Linking Words
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edition from circulation.
Thank you for your usual understanding.
Yours Faithfully
Elisha EmmanuelLinking Words
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.