You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. Your local museum has asked for feedback on your recent visit. Write to the museum. In your letter •Tell them what you liked and what you didn’t like •Make some suggestions for improvement •Describe some other exhibits you would like to see You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Mr Ann I visited the museum recently, and your office asked me for feedback so I am writing
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to share some points of view. I would like to say first of all that I really enjoy the lighting system of the building, it makes me feel so comfortable
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I am walking around and taking some photos.
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, on floor 2, the way all oil painting pictures were displayed by grouping as four looked so attractive. Each picture comes with detailed labels to help all visitors approach information easily. I will recommend
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place to my friends.
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, I think that the museum could have reviewed the facilities on floors 2 and 3, adding more furniture, something like chairs.
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the space was quite big we cannot find the area to take a break. I would
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be very interested to see more exhibits in the future. I am particularly excited about Egyptian history and Astronomy. Thanks for your interest in my feedback. Best regards, Mai Huong
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exhibit
  • architectural design
  • educational value
  • interactive displays
  • accessibility features
  • contemporary art
  • local history
  • child-friendly
  • guided tours
  • workshops
  • enhanced
  • crowded environment
  • seating
  • differently-abled visitors
  • activities
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