The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table compares the number of tourists who went on worldwide travel in 1990,1995,2000,2005.
Overall
, there described the changes in 5 areas such
as Africa, America,Asia, the Pacific, Europe and the Middle East. In addition
, it is clear that
there was drastic growth in almost all years.
Looking into details, in the first year the most significant percentage of travelling people 280.2 million
were reported in Europe and this
number tremendously increased by 110 million
over the period of 5 years while
the Middle9 East ranks last
with 9.8 million
tourists which remained relatively stable. Moreover
, other areas such
as Africa, America, Asia and the Pacific experienced increases of 2,32.5,20.1 million
respectively. In the same ,way the total number of people who went on international travel was 448.9 million
and over the period of 15 years it is grown dramatically by 244.8 million
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