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The charts below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate the percentage of
different sized
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households
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 in the UK, in 1981 and 2001.
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, the most common sized household in both measured years was that of 2-person
households
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,
while
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 6-person
households
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 were the least common.
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,
while
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 the percentage of 1-person and 2-person
households
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 increased, the percentage of all
other sized
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households
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 decreased. In 1981, 31% of all
households
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 contained 2 people,
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 20% of
households
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 contained 3 people. 1-person and 4-person
households
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 made up similar percentages, at 17% and 18% respectively,
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 5-person and 6-person
households
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 only made up 8% and 6% of the total. By 2001, the proportion of 1-person and 2-person
households
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 had risen to 26% and 34% respectively. Meanwhile, the proportion of all other sized
households
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 had decreased, with 3 and 4-person
households
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 dropping to similar levels, at 17% and 15% respectively, and 5 and 6-person
households
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 dropping to 6% and 2% respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words households with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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