Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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right choice for choosing a
friend
is becoming increasingly controversial. Many people prefer to do
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with those who always agree with their
opinions
while
some think
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to them.
This
will discuss both arguments in depth and will provide some reasons why choosing
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friends
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who sometimes disagree with them is superior. In
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most of the public selects those individuals as a
friend
who always
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the same thoughts as them. Put
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, Folks of a country think there will be no clash between them.
In addition
, the bond between them will remain strong.
For instance
, when a topic is being discussed between friends who have the same opinion
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it obviously peace remains between them and there will
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any
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clash. Through
this
,
strong
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bond between them will generate. Shortly,
due to
these reasons humankind prefer to select those as a
friend
who always acknowledge
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their
opinions
. To be with those
mankinds
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mankind
who believes it's better to make
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a friend
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friend
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friends
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who sometimes
think
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opposite
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the opposite
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to
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them.
This
is because
,
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they learn how to debate and
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put
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their own
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views
in front of anyone.
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, they get knowledge and different points regarding the topic. I have my own example here, in my gathering when a topic is being discussed each of us put different
views
regarding that.
As a result
, our knowledge increases and we always learn from each other.
Overall
, making friends who sometimes have different
opinions
has proved more beneficial. In conclusion, regarding
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a
friend
individuals have different
views
.
This
essay discussed why some people believe to choose friends who always agree
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thoughts
while
other
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others
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do not and put some reasons
of
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for
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these
views
. In my opinion, in order to increase knowledge and skills an individual always
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looking
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for a
friend
who
have
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has
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different
views
and
opinions
to
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what they have.
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  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
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  • cherish
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  • deepen
  • attach importance to
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