The chart below shows the information on how frequently people in the USA ate in fastfood restaurants between 2003 and 2013

The chart below shows the information on how frequently people in the USA ate in fastfood restaurants between 2003 and 2013
The bar chart illustrates how often
people
eat in the USA fast
food
restaurants
between 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, it is evident that there are more
people
who eat once a week and twice a month
whereas
few
people
eat every day in fast
food
restaurants
.
To begin
, in 2003, the
percentage
of
people
that eats every day in fast
food
restaurants
is just under 5% and in the other remaining years is the same
percentage
of about 3%.
However
, among
people
that eat more in fast
food
restaurants
several times a week 20% in 2006 followed by over 15% of
people
that eats in 2003 and 2013.
Also
,
people
over 30% which is the highest eats once a week in the fast
food
restaurants
in 2006 and approximately 31% of
people
in 2003 and a low number of
people
just under 30% in 2013.
Furthermore
, there are a significant number of
people
that eats in fast
food
restaurants
once or twice a month in 2013 which is the highest compared to others and a low
percentage
of 25% in 2006.
Although
, among
people
who eat a few times a year are more in 2006 and 2013 the same
percentage
of 15% and
people
who never eat in fast
food
restaurants
are less than 5% in 2006 and 2013.
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