The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The tables show the comparison between
London
's and
Sydney
's temperatures,
as well as
sunrise and sunset
hours
in the ending weekend of December 2018.
Overall
, the weather in
London
was a lot colder than
Sydney
.
On the other hand
,
London
enjoyed less
sunlight
per day than the city of Australia in the provided timespan. About the
temperature
of the two cities, Saturday witnessed both the highest of 13
degrees
and the lowest
temperature
of 3
degrees
that
London
had.
Sydney
,
however
, had their peak on Sunday at 31
degrees
and slump on Friday at 17
degrees
. The
temperature
gap got up to 12
degrees
for
Sydney
,
while
the maximum difference in
temperature
was only 10 for
London
. Turning to
sunlight
hours
, Londoners started seeing their sun at around 8:00 AM, which showed a deviation of only 1 minute throughout the three days. The sun set early for
London
at about 16:00, making
sunlight
last
for 8
hours
.
In contrast
,
Sydney
enjoyed approximately 14
hours
of
sunlight
, with sun rose at as early as 5:45 in the morning and set at later than 20:06 in the evening.
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  • The tables compare
  • temperatures
  • hours of daylight
  • ranged from
  • consistently high
  • slight increase
  • remained stable
  • significantly fewer
  • enjoyed
  • overall
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