The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The tables show the comparison between
London
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's and
Sydney
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's temperatures,
as well as
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sunrise and sunset
hours
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in the ending weekend of December 2018.
Overall
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, the weather in
London
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was a lot colder than
Sydney
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.
On the other hand
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,
London
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enjoyed less
sunlight
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per day than the city of Australia in the provided timespan. About the
temperature
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of the two cities, Saturday witnessed both the highest of 13
degrees
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and the lowest
temperature
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of 3
degrees
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that
London
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had.
Sydney
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,
however
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, had their peak on Sunday at 31
degrees
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and slump on Friday at 17
degrees
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. The
temperature
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gap got up to 12
degrees
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for
Sydney
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,
while
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the maximum difference in
temperature
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was only 10 for
London
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. Turning to
sunlight
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hours
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, Londoners started seeing their sun at around 8:00 AM, which showed a deviation of only 1 minute throughout the three days. The sun set early for
London
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at about 16:00, making
sunlight
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last
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for 8
hours
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.
In contrast
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,
Sydney
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enjoyed approximately 14
hours
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of
sunlight
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, with sun rose at as early as 5:45 in the morning and set at later than 20:06 in the evening.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words london, sydney, hours, sunlight, temperature, degrees with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "set" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • The tables compare
  • temperatures
  • hours of daylight
  • ranged from
  • consistently high
  • slight increase
  • remained stable
  • significantly fewer
  • enjoyed
  • overall
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