In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computer, the internet and smartphone, more and more people are to starting to work from home. What are the advantage and disadvantages of this development.

Many years ago, almost all the

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workers

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are taken public

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transportation

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or drive to

work

.

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, as

techonology

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technology

advances, the

numbers

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number

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of workers´ using

computer

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computers

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, the

internet

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Internet

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and smarts phones are increases;

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, many of them

beging

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being

begin

to

work

from

home

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this

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I will

futher

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further

discuss the pros and

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cons

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of

this

developing situation. First of all,

taken

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taking

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advantages

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advantage

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of

modernize

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modernised

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techologies

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technologies

is a

trand

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trend

now

day

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a day

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. Using computers, smarts phones and the internet, allows us

tho

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to

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be more

effecient

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efficient

in our

work

.

As well as

save time.

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, if a workers officer is

the

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aproximetly

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approximately

30 minutes

for

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from

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their

home

, that

menas

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means

that he or she

have

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has

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to live their house one hour before, as we need to take de traffic into

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consideration,

however

, if you

work

from

home

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then

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you will have more time to spare. Another benefit from

work

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at

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home

is that you are in your

comnfort

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comfort

zone, which

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to

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research

people

are more productive when there are in it. As

such

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are sill

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some drawbacks to

this

situation.

Although

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there are full of advantages to

this

matter,

people

eventualy

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eventually

will take from

garanted

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granted

guaranteed

. When

people

start to get

confortable

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comfortable

to a certain level, the

laisness

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lais ness

behavior

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behaviour

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will start to express. For

instances

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instance

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,

focus

can lay back

wacthing

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watching

tv or reading

magazine

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a magazine

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while

work

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working

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. And

thus

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this

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is show a lot of

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responsibility

and

not

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do not

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focus

on their tasks, because there is no one to

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watch

after

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themafter

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. Another point

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is that the environment will

also

take

is

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its

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place in

this

. The office itself will send a signal to

people

who

work

their

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there

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suggesting

this

is a

work

environment

and

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that

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need to be

focus

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focused

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on. In conclusion, as

techonologies

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technologies

advances

mworking

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working

from

home

, made very easy and

convinient

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convenient

.

However

, lack of

responsability

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responsibility

and

focus

will

also

take its

tool

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toll

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in the future.